Out for Blood

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From lusting for blood to bloodlust- that's been my reading lately.

Having just completed the Twilight saga, I've moved on to The Ice Man: Confessions of a Mafia Contract Killer, by Philip Carlo.  It's the true story of Richard "The Ice Man" Kuklinski, one of the most notorious killers-for-hire in history.  His name came up toward the end of my Abnormal Psych class last semester, and I was intrigued.  My professor shuddered as she described seeing a taped interview with the man, how dead and remorseless his eyes were as he recited some of the horrific methods he used to torture and kill his victims.  For decades, nobody suspected this husband and father of three, a man who loved entertaining his neighbors and showering presents on his family.  Having an interest in the criminal mind myself, I decided to read more about him.

At the risk of having a contract taken out on me, I have to say I'm disappointed.  Kuklinski is a fascinating case, and the author has the potential to tell a gripping story.  Unfortunately, though Carlo has talent (this book was a NY Times bestseller, and he has written several other biographies), I had some real problems with this book.   Carlo was in desperate need of two things: a thesaurus, and an editor who actually knows how to edit.  The words "stone cold killer" were used to describe just about every killer in the book, repeatedly, thereby losing its effectiveness as a description for the Ice Man.  Or any of the other killers, for that matter. 

That wasn't the only repetitive part of the book.  Phrases and even sections of the book are used again and again, sometimes verbatim.  Annoying!  The book should, by rights, be half as long as it is.  A little editing and proper organization would have made this an excellent biography.  As is, I found myself becoming aggravated, my focus on the story constantly broken by yet another "this was to prove to be a fatal mistake" or "he was dead before he knew it" or "the police had no idea..."

My beef is with the editor more than the author.  It is the editor's job to clean this sort of thing up, and he didn't do it.

On the plus side, this has hammered home to me just how crucial a good editor is!

Final analysis?  Richard Kuklinski's story is fascinating and ugly.  If you're really interested, then get this book from the library, but don't buy it.  Otherwise, give it a pass.

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I think I'll pass on that. Are you feeling better?

You're better off, I think. There's 3 HBO specials on him, so if you want to know more, that's the way to go I think. Especially the 2nd and 3rd; he didn't like the interviewer in the first and so didn't share much.

Yes, I'm feeling much better, thanks. My stomach has shrunk and I either have to eat light or, if I want something heavier, I can't eat much of it. And I definitely can't drink coffee yet. I learned that one the hard way. But I'm going back to work today, so that's good. Thanks for asking. :0)

That does sound like an interesting story to read...Sorry the presentation and editing was so disappointing though! I suppose all books aren't created equal...

That's great that you're feeling better! Yah!

It always amazes me how much the presentation of the story (such as editing) can mke or break for me. There have been a couple of times that I've stopped reading because I couldn't take the grammar mistakes, or repeating of words and phrases. Good for you for making it to the end of the book!

Glad to heat that you are feeling better.

i will see if they have it here....

i am happy to know you are feeling better.

Yay for Twilight!

I think it'd be an interesting story but I think I'd rather do my own research on the man than to read this book. I blame the editor for allowing it to go to press like that but it is still the author's fault too - how in the heck did they actually pay someone money for being unable to write a freakin' book? Geesh.

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